A garden is lifeless without flowers
Valley seems dull without meanders of water
A city without light and a house without tenants;
Abandoned,abandoned forever
The other horizon seems always cheerful and welcoming,
Yet too far to be reached
What is the charm of desert when an oasis is gone?
Because you are all oasis,
And I am as dead as desert
You are my muse
You are my redemption,
Yet I feels we are miles apart
Finally you did it. Congratulations!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem! Loved it thoroughly.
And thank you so much for giving credit to me (as one of the persons) for inspiring you. I am honored. But it was the reflection of your own goodness than what I would have actually done for you. The blogging is the journey which is very rewarding. You would never know when people starts admiring your writings. You would never know when you actually became little better than the day before. You would never know the joy of finishing up a post and be able to post in straight in our blog. You would never know how many friends we get through blogging. But you started blogging, you would discover those joys one by one with every passing day.
Actually, I was waiting for this day to come. To see you blogging. To see you start writing formally. I read lots of statuses in your Facebook which carried immense potential. So, all the best.
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Thank you so much acho.Your hard work and passion has always been my inspiration. As I am being amatuer in the world of bloggging I am facing some problems. Hope I will cope with it soon.
DeleteDear bro, it really is a beautiful poem to start with. If this is how you showcase your talent the very first time you blog, then I am certain that you will come up with posts that will win the hearts of many.
ReplyDeleteNever feel nervous or have that inferior complex about your blog posts for every blogger has his/her uniqueness, style and talent of writing. No one would have written the poem that you have beautifully woven had it not been you. No one would have experienced what you have had and no one would have felt the same as you or gone through what you are going through. So always let your feelings, the voices of your inner instincts unfold.
It is a fact bro; Is like I am handing over to you this passion and the responsibility of blogging to you for I cannot always allot time for it as I did it once when I was at college. Life with family is entirely different and challenging when you have to bear all the responsibilities. So blog as much as and to your heart's content when you have this opportunity right in your hand.
Thank you so mush ashim........an inspiration for me,you are always in my heart. I love your hard work,care and love that you have been blessed with. I will and if not I am true to myself that I will always live up to your expectations.
Deletenever expected amatuer would come-up with this kind of writings..i mean the very first beginning...lots more to see your talent..keep going..
ReplyDeleteThank you for again following my blog. I never expected unknowns like you will follow my blog and take a precious time of your tightly scheduled day to just read my blog.Thank you for being my encouragement.
ReplyDeletewow.....truly beautiful...the more i read your writings, the more i fall for it...thank you...seriously,..the writings are inspiring.....all the best ahead
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